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Tremors

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Literature Text

an integrated concept too close to be defined
a complacent type of image plunged deep into her mind
an energy so fervent that she cannot leave behind
the musing that she's been here before
(because she has been)
Here is the part where her nether starts to wander
wrapping its eyes up, in, around, or under
a notion I know that she couldn't be fonder
of making believe doesn't exist
(Although it really)
Does prehaps dealing with something so upsetting
Bringing up things we know she is regretting
What she uses to replace the love she isn't getting
Does it make her feel less than clean?

yes.

yes it does.

Now...

Honed in, as we are, on what the problem is
Why she won't let him give her one little kiss
Her fear of being plunged back into the abyss
YES, Fear is the Name of the Game
(Isn't it always)
That, is what keeps their lines from being blurred.
Fear, is what keeps her cry for help from being heard.
The girl is afraid of one all or nothing word.
The girl is afraid of love.

love.

The girl is afraid of love.
It's almost 4 in the morning. I was staring at the ceiling, when it all just popped out. Like a jack in the box. I'll delve into the what and how and why later. I'm kind of in a state of dumb founded neutrality towards this peice until further notice.

On second thought. If I ever decide to demean the beauty of this peice by tearing it to shreds with analysis smack me. You guys figure out what you like about it, or don't like about it. Take it for what it is. Right now, I...I'm too frelling tired.
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projectVIV's avatar
So sweet, yet kinda sad. I liked it. ^-^